FINAL CRIT

decent feedback, people like the drawings i have so far, mostly the colours

this feedback sheet is too big to scan so here is a rough transcript of it


KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING - CRITICAL AWARENESS

STRENGTHS
Appropriate media use at end
images communicate really well and have strong sense of mystery
audience is considered in the intrigue of drawings

IMPROVEMENTS
how do you refine digitally to make product
communication - layout - type? how much text?  is needed? text and image? format? too much text?

KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING - RESEARCH

STRENGTHS
condensed so that it can be completed
animation exploration
digital

IMPROVEMENTS
consider format that is more engaging to audience, lift the flap?
more white space

COGNITIVE SKILLS - PROBLEM ANALYSIS, PROBLEM SOLVING

STRENGTHS
visual investigation means your drawings look Russian Well done Appropriate time
Switching to pencil - FTW
You got rid of stories inappropriate for kids
drawings are censored
inclusion of animation shows your strength and improves range
seeing this mocked up in context with illustration of book

IMPROVEMENTS
technological improvements to format?
do you have a viewpoint you want to communicate?

PRACTICAL SKILLS - PRACTICAL AND CONCEPTUAL DEVELOPMENT

STRENGTHS
this project shows you have drawn your way to conclusion. your development through drawing is commendable. you seem to of really hit on something

IMPROVEMENTS
(diagram of rectangle with arrows pointing out to these words)
standardise drawings across formats to hit aims. Product

PRACTICAL SKILLS

STRENGTHS
Tone of voice

KEY TRANSFERABLE SKILLS - PRESENTATION AND EVALUATION
STRENGTHS
you can work through all of this through drawing

IMPROVEMENTS
its been a bit messy you didnt seem sure of what you wanted to achieve

GENERAL
your drawings are exciting. really interesting developments
maybe just do one booklet well