The feedback I got in the group crit was mostly positive but it was raised that i may be portraying the fathers in a negative light if i accuse them wasting time and being at the pub instead of reading to their children, especially since most of these fathers are probably busy doing work and important stuff
ive changed my plan to making a booklet about reading from the environment
it will follow a loose narrative of a family reading the booklet text from several different environments
the text will be disguised into the environment so the reader of the booklet is also reading from the environment.
I'm going to sketch and draw it digitally now that i have a solid plan for the booklet, id like to try more purely digital drawing after my underwhelming results with digital in the last module
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